Minor WD comments
Tom Donaldson
tdonaldson at stsci.edu
Thu Apr 7 19:35:40 CEST 2016
Hi All,
I have some minor suggestions on the document:
Page 2, 2nd line, spelling: “othe” => “other”
Page 5, wording suggestion: “makes indeed” => “indeed makes”
Page 6, last paragraph, clarification: Clarify that the mapping itself is contained in a separate document.
Page 6, 2nd paragraph, clarification: Clarify that this document is providing an alternative to the utype definition as opposed to an enhanced utype definition.
Page 10, #6 in list: What is the “sic” referring to?
Thanks,
Tom
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