new version for the draft on Observation DM Core Components

[Mireille Louys]

Dear DM WG members,

Please find here a revised version of the Working Draft
"Observation DM Core Components"

I tried to include corrections of typos and language
suggested by Bruno Rino, clarify text as suggested.

Still some parts have to be completed and/or corrected:
and names (target...) to be decided.

5 Description of Implementations

3.3 New concepts : type of observation ,access formats

5 Description of Implementations

Appendix A ucds for observables

Thanks in advance for your comments and feedback.
Best regards, Mireille


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