VOSpace v1.15 PR comments

[Norman Gray]

On 2009 Jul 13, at 15:49, Dave Morris wrote:

> It may be too late to make major changes to the VOS 1.5 document,  
> but the VOS 2.x document will be based on VOS 1.5, and your comments  
> will help us to avoid the same mistakes in VOS 2.x.

A late response (sorry), prompted by the recent TCG telecon on the RFC  
statuses:

I didn't intent to suggest any major changes; my suggestions were  
mostly about the exposition.

I'll respond to Dave's other message separately.

All the best,

Norman


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